W.i.p. Ford Orion

[Orion-Heizer]

My first try (but the Wheels are not mine ) . It´s a Ford Orion.

I think the roof is a little bit high.

Sorry for my bad english



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[P2sta]

hi man, I edited name of your thread, because it will have better sence now

for next time please use attachment system for your pictures. Then please post unsmoothed wire and some clays, that we can help you with the mesh, because there are some areas that need work keep working

[Orion-Heizer]

and wich areas ?

i´m a beginner and i need help (what can i do better .....)


can anybody speak german ? my english is not sooooo good but i try it to translate

[P2sta]

Originally Posted by Orion-Heizer

and wich areas ?

i´m a beginner and i need help (what can i do better .....)


can anybody speak german ? my english is not sooooo good but i try it to translate

post wire and clay render, then we can spot the bumps better

btw. here is lots of guys that speaks German, I speak German too, but I'm not very good in it

[X-Ice]

Originally Posted by P2sta

post wire and clay render, then we can spot the bumps better

btw. here is lots of guys that speaks German, I speak German too, but I'm not very good in it

why u didnt tell me that u speak german, too?

[Orion-Heizer]

......with smooth......

[P2sta]

Originally Posted by X-Ice

why u didnt tell me that u speak german, too?

I thought I told you on msn , not sure


to Orion-Heizer: please unsmoothed wire

[Orion-Heizer]

.....unsmoothed.....

[P2sta]

I think you need to work on the polyflow, you have too dense wire on the back and you need some more edge loops on the front bumper

[Orion-Heizer]

ok, thx. i try it. how can i make the windows ? there aren´t any edges. how can i make these edges ?

sorry for my bad bad english, i hope you can understand my